Rate "The Longest Time"

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  • 3-Fine. Fine. Good. Good.

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  • 2-One for the So-So Corral

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Okay, so I couldn't wait to get home from work to read this one. I found a quiet corner at work and was able to read it. This was so good, Nala, I really enjoyed it! I always wanted David to speak up and tell Maddie how he felt when they left the bowling alley that morning. They seemed so happy together. It would've been the perfect time.
 
Okay, so I couldn't wait to get home from work to read this one. I found a quiet corner at work and was able to read it. This was so good, Nala, I really enjoyed it! I always wanted David to speak up and tell Maddie how he felt when they left the bowling alley that morning. They seemed so happy together. It would've been the perfect time.
I'm so glad you liked it, Marlena! David did pass up so many opportunities to tell Maddie. That morning after their kiss was just the perfect time to talk to Maddie, never mind that Sam is sitting home waiting for her.
On another note I'm glad I found a little scene that no one else has written about, it's not really easy to find a new angle to write about.
 
This is such a nice, sweet story! I really like it. There were many times when I wished David had told Maddie how he felt and this was definitely one of those times. I had a bit of a stressful day today and this happy story was a nice way to end it. 😊
 
This is such a nice, sweet story! I really like it. There were many times when I wished David had told Maddie how he felt and this was definitely one of those times. I had a bit of a stressful day today and this happy story was a nice way to end it. 😊
I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. I love the happy endings, we all wish that David had stepped up and swallowed his fears and his pride when it really mattered. Glad that your day ended better!
 
I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. I love the happy endings, we all wish that David had stepped up and swallowed his fears and his pride when it really mattered. Glad that your day ended better!
It's funny how we love a happy ending, but watch a show with a sad ending.
 
There have been so many times in which I wanted to grab David by the lapels and yell out: "Tell her already!!!" Thank you for creating this lovely scenario.
 
There have been so many times in which I wanted to grab David by the lapels and yell out: "Tell her already!!!" Thank you for creating this lovely scenario.
Yep, me too. Or just slap his head lol. For a spontaneous kind of guy, he really hesitated with Maddie, didn't he?
I'm glad you liked the story!
 
So.. how did I miss all your stories Nala??? This is crazy. I just found this when Ryan posted Double Date and now I have to go back and read because I am HOOKED! I love the dialogue and how you wove it all around! Awesome!
 
So.. how did I miss all your stories Nala??? This is crazy. I just found this when Ryan posted Double Date and now I have to go back and read because I am HOOKED! I love the dialogue and how you wove it all around! Awesome!
You've no idea how happy I am to know that you're enjoying my stories ☺️. Really glad that you're reading through all of them!
And Ryan, thank you for gathering them all in one place!
 
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