Rate "A Safe Place for the Night"

[Boink]

On a scale of 1-5, rate "A Safe Place for the Night."

 

[northernlight]

Good work! I can easily see that scene slotted into the pilot episode.

 

[Marlena]

Thank you, northernlight, for reading my short story and for your awesome review! I really appreciate it. Makes me want to write more!

 

[Nala]

I absolutely love this, Marlena, I've bookmarked it as one of my favourites. Love your writing.

 

[Marlena]

I absolutely love this, Marlena, I've bookmarked it as one of my favourites. Love your writing.

Thank you so much, Nala! When I read feedback like this, it really makes me want to keep writing. Also, FYI, Boink should be presenting my newest story on this site real soon...

 

[Nala]

Thank you so much, Nala! When I read feedback like this, it really makes me want to keep writing. Also, FYI, Boink should be presenting my newest story on this site real soon...

Do please keep on writing. We love these scenes and extensions of what happened between them. So sweet to see their beginning.
And looking forward to your next story!